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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-11-25 05:29 PM


Essence of space decorated a space with lights that would challenge a dark night in a way you would prefer darkness to light

Gently moving as a dark mist to move to levels below sub-conscious to luxate



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1 posted 2004-11-25 05:37 PM


a wonderful feeling here
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2 posted 2004-11-25 05:46 PM


Reading it again I seem to be writing about a blazing light but I actually wrote it about a darkened room.

Thanks for your words.

Dave

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