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vandana
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0 posted 2004-11-25 10:48 AM


I tried very coin,
Tossed upon this wishing well,
Looking back,
My memories racing back,
Om my mind,
Slowly,
Driving through the same track,
Of tomorrow's goodbye,
Oh my oh,
I thought myself again
For a minute,
A long pause,
What have I done?
Oh my oh!
Wind blowing harder again,
In my head,
Still wandering away,
Long back way,
To my heart,
Where I lost it's way,
To my only home,
Oh my oh!
Look at these dreams
I have been watching,
Through my mind,
Dring through the path,
Where lead me
To my home,
Oh my oh!



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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-11-25 10:54 AM


vandana
A strong write, enjoyed.

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2 posted 2004-11-25 08:45 PM


I liked this...
Happy Thanksgiving!

~Alli~

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3 posted 2004-11-26 06:03 AM


sometimes that is all you can say when you don't know what else to say or what to do
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