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Idea of Order for a Winter Blizzard

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Huan Yi
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Each
from each,
the snowflakes drift...
as seems to seek through frosty air

something unseen,...
something beyond
that was, before, unintelligible
in the cold and crowded clouds above.

Semblance: of purpose,
mote of meaning,
a curious flow
as swirls...desire

to die
as sighs upon a warm...
blue, though indifferent, vacant pane

in as close
as they come...to love.


© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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Huan Yi
Well done, enjoyed the read. Happy Thanksgiving.
Enchantress
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Very nicely penned.
Enjoyed the read and have a wonderful Thanksgiving.

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

VAS
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3 posted 11-25-2004 11:51 AM       View Profile for VAS   Email VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

this stanza, especially, has a wonderful feel to it:

Semblance: of purpose,
                        mote of meaning,
                        a curious flow
                        as swirls...desire

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

passing shadows
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how this touches me...
sigh
*Alli4000*
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amazing...

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Donít cry because itís over, smile because it happened...

Huan Yi
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Thanks everyone
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beauty of thought.

beautiful poem again. sentimental piece.
 
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