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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-11-25 09:15 AM





Midnight Walk in Battle Creek

Night and darkness shadowed in
as heavy gray clouds felt of snow
quiet is the air, and thin,
awaiting Mother Nature’s show

O the beauty of a night first born,
a Michigan town, Battle Creek
smells of grape nuts in early morn
for these are memories I would keep.

Company had come by that night,
good times were had by all,
then it soon chimed, 'twas midnight
and snow had begun to fall

Twenty miles east of Kalamazoo
Battle Creek quietly resides,
Kalamazoo has great winds, true,
off Michigan’s great lake side

Battle Creek is a different town,
as quiet reigns over the snow,
instead of drifts and shifting hills
the white just chooses to grow.

Midnight walks on streets of white
a wondrous treat in its own,
this is when magic begins, and
why we believe in cherrystones.

Did you know that snow has song?
It's heard when winds don’t blow,
crystalline tinkling is taken to heart
and snow fairies softly glow ~

I know for we stood, quiet, still,
heard chiming tings softly surround
no one spoke, but shyly descried
as snow came twinkling down.

O Battle Creek of Michigan,
someday I’ll come to visit again.


~*~

©Karilea Rilling Jungel
29 September, 2000
revised
15 December 2003

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

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ice
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1 posted 2004-11-25 11:40 AM


"Did you know that snow has song?"

Yes I do, I have heard it many times drum its gentle beat against my parka..Its rhythm is enchanting..What can be expected but beautiful music from enchanters such as snow fae's?

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2 posted 2004-11-25 11:48 AM


Karilea

This is lovely....But I always thought of snow as very quiet...I'm glad to know that it talks.  Of course, I haven't seen that much of it.  Happy Thanksgiving, Sissy!  

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3 posted 2004-11-25 12:03 PM


"Did you know that snow has song?
It's heard when winds don’t blow,
crystalline tinkling is taken to heart
and snow fairies softly glow ~"

Yes I do know that snow has song
for I heard it soft and clear last night.

~Blessings to you and yours this Thanksgiving Karilea~

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4 posted 2004-11-25 01:24 PM



Did you know that snow has song?
It's heard when winds don’t blow,
crystalline tinkling is taken to heart
and snow fairies softly glow ~

yes i do too

it's saying
dont curse me
for the calamity
i may bring,
please see
the gifts in
the pausing moment

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5 posted 2004-11-25 02:06 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

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6 posted 2004-11-26 06:20 AM


maybe one day I'll write like this...I can only hope

thanks for sharing

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7 posted 2004-11-26 03:44 PM


*sigh* absolutely beautful.

~Alli~

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8 posted 2004-11-26 04:41 PM


Did you know that snow has song?
It's heard when winds don’t blow,
crystalline tinkling is taken to heart
and snow fairies softly glow ~


Hopefully one day, when I see it, that I'll be able to hear it too....

Beautiful Kari

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

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