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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Lone messenger rides a dark horse that kicks up dirt along a road gathers speed to local destiny with haste, grasps identities on the way never to return or ask the time of day He's a carrier of nightly courts swaps names and places as last resort had lost his life long ago one sees displaced from his mounted seat a rider runs the local beat to reach a final place you say with a borrowed identity that day... so dark hood covers the face lest you seek a gypsy trace cause he wanders not for lack of home the final route rests unknown.... [This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-25-2004 06:30 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I feel like that rider some days |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
ecrivan, beautiful interesting write. enjoyed~ Happy Thanksgiving!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ecrivan Interesting write, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Martin...very much enjoyed the read. Love the pic!! Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
poem reads better when divided up..presto! |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
two words.......Love It :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thanks for bringing these latest poems up for reread.. |
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