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Broken
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The woods

0 posted 2004-11-25 02:16 AM



AND THE WIND

These days
Are my life
Dreaming away

Oh dreams
If not true
Come to something
Come to anything
Before the last dream
Is dreamt
Before all my love
Is loved
And all my life
Is...


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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-11-25 05:25 AM


I don't have dreams right now
good write here

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The World of Poetry
2 posted 2004-11-25 01:13 PM


"Before the last dream
Is dreamt
Before all my love
Is loved
And all my life
Is..."


Loved that part...love this...
Happy Thanksgiving!

~Alli~

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2004-11-25 01:16 PM


Broken
Enjoyed the read, Have a happy holiday.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-11-25 01:20 PM


"Before the last dream
Is dreamt
Before all my love
Is loved
And all my life
Is..."

Excellent excellent write!!
I very much enjoyed visiting your country.
It is beautiful beyond compare.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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