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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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My love appears, just like me Although, of pious belief One thread of a tapestry An illusion being woven By God’s treasures Bathing in precious light Masculine and feminine An intentional contribution By light of Destiny To feelings, clues to answers Licking a lighted street Appearing unclothed, breathing water More outrageous is multiple beginnings Ones with reflexivity Polar autonomy, alike in every way? I’m following to deliberate off the mark Where wide currency legends Running with no risk to spoil it Playing me, speaking more loudly Like air I can’t breathe without Deeply immersed Within a vast store of authors Of old friendship and parables With aftertastes plausible Forbidden and alluring He gave me Deja Vu ladies wear Colonial Breakfast in Bed With hawk vertigo Hugs once lodged rare In 18th Century Capital Leaving me open to the elements Gentle vows That meant no harm And death by fire remembers That glorious man in the street It is the story, in the first person I’d ever put my hands on Walking across extraordinarily deep Windows, off the middle of day We certainly were heavy brass door knobs Knockers of Independence, weren’t we? Touching liquid waves of ultrasound Never breathing the words twice in a lifetime |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Touching liquid waves of ultrasound Never breathing the words twice in a lifetime" liked these lines here a lot  always enjoy the imagery you create |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
He gave me Deja Vu ladies wear not sure why..but gave me a smile~~ but I am in a rare mood lately hugs and I hope you have a Happy Thanksgiving M |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Lee J Couldn't resist. Dave My love appears, just like me Speared by belief Woven into flickering tapestries of illusion Drenched in the sunlight Of a single beam To thought And exultation Freezing dreams to desires Achieving feeling Forbidden and alluring Dressed in memories Circling To fly to heights Leaving me open to the elements Gentle vows That meant no harm And death by fire remembers That glorious man in the street It is the story, in the first person I’d ever put my hands on Walking across extraordinarily deep Windows, off the middle of day We certainly were heavy brass door knobs Knockers of Independence, weren’t we? Touching liquid waves of ultrasound Never breathing the words twice in a lifetime IP: Logged © Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserve |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ You are quite remarkable!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Interesting write, enjoyed. Happy Holiday |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!! Eric |
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