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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-11-24 09:23 AM




Finalé

Snow, clinging to leaves
Fall waited, winter’s first kiss
Shivered, melting tears

© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
babygirlwlove
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1 posted 2004-11-24 09:27 AM


how lovely is that...

**babygirL**

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Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2004-11-24 09:28 AM


damn lady...
that's beautiful!  

LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-11-24 09:29 AM


shivered melting tears

well done Karilea....
Did you see that mountain climbing show last evening?  It was awesome, could not turn it off?

Anyway, your poem reminded me of such.  

Thank you

kayjay
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4 posted 2004-11-24 09:31 AM


The transitions of the eternal wheel of the seaons seem to draw out our best.  This is a fine welcome to winter.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Martie
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5 posted 2004-11-24 10:38 AM


A lovely picture window, sissy!  
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6 posted 2004-12-11 09:35 AM


pretty
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7 posted 2004-12-11 10:03 AM


It sounds like the weather we had yesterday.  I must admit it affected my mood!
Enjoyed your poem.
                 miscellanea

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8 posted 2004-12-11 03:22 PM


Wow...ok...one more wow!
A truly wonderful write.

Eric

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