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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2004-11-24 08:01 AM


je suis loup
que vous êtes femme de ciel

I am wolf
you are sky woman

the valleys are your limb songs
my voice is your hollow soul
you know my eyes

ils sont le feu humide
they are the wet fire

I pant low at your wound
you writhe in my anguish
and gift me your liquor

vous êtes le mythe
de gémissement parlez
you are the moan myth speak

and I wear the soot colors
of your spirit stone caverns
where you are pale moss mornings

danseur de péché de tremblement
my quiver sin dancer
________

Dark

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-11-24 08:33 AM


damn...
now this just made my morning m'friend..
slow good morning hugs to you...

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2004-11-24 08:33 AM


Well...I dont speak french...but...
(if I was Gomez? I'd be kissing up your arm right now) lol

"this medium is over taken by keyboard prophets who believe their every word profound."

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Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-11-24 08:33 AM


and I wear the soot colors
of your spirit stone caverns
where you are pale moss mornings

danseur de péché de tremblement
my quiver sin dancer

~*~

Oh man...
between you and Martie, you are both
raising the bar to the skies...

here's to your eyes,
and all that your soul feels!

Bravo!

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2004-11-24 08:36 AM


WHOA...look at that...a triple moth post


is that a threesome? lmao

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2004-11-24 08:39 AM


lol @ Jan.  
babygirlwlove
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6 posted 2004-11-24 08:58 AM


you go, my Big Bad Wolf...lol

love you,red
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2004-11-24 09:01 AM


"danseur de péché de tremblement
my quiver sin dancer"

my oh my...sigh, shiver and shudder.
good morning Dark!!!

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

LeeJ
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8 posted 2004-11-24 09:39 AM


mental states of significance, the trance & dance of love you have certainly described so apply....you are a flute of joy!
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with you
9 posted 2004-11-24 10:25 AM


"my voice is your hollow soul
you know my eyes"


wow this is absolutely one of my favorites from you...and I have many

Martie
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10 posted 2004-11-24 10:26 AM


"and I wear the soot colors
of your spirit stone caverns
where you are pale moss mornings"

Good morning, my friend...I hope your day is filled with good things!  

Cloud 9
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11 posted 2004-11-24 10:37 AM


Very nice....I'm impressed!!!
Susan
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walking the surreal
12 posted 2004-11-24 02:52 PM


Beautiful D - simply beautiful -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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13 posted 2004-11-25 01:20 AM



Margherita
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14 posted 2004-11-25 08:27 AM


Ezra Pound too would applaud here! I love the different languages which create powerful and beautiful music...
Love, Margherita

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