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ecrivan
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0 posted 2004-11-24 01:31 AM



long vaccination wait ahead
one of dozens appeared instead
for their annual shot
all for a lonely doctor in on Sundays
time passes as the crowd thins out
not allergic to eggs
no listed oral medications
generally in good health
the wait in good health
dozens for their annual shot
of attenuated virus
created such that one has to return
until the next lonely year
of another wait in anonymous clinic
a one year dose is not enough
arguement goes the genome mutates
might wait for the alteration to occur
take a flu shot next year..
obigations thrown at the consumer
a return again for egg incubated stuff
a long waited return
as the genome mutates
the earth rotates
all is subject
dependant on whims
of a health standard officialdom...
and one really never knows
if a shot was ever needed
but precautions were heeded.



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1 posted 2004-11-24 04:59 AM


never had one, probably never will

good write martin

ecrivan
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2 posted 2004-11-25 04:22 AM


See what happens to cope with Canadian winters?Hope the flu never comes your way either...
Margherita
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3 posted 2004-11-25 08:42 AM


and one really never knows
if a shot was ever needed
but precautions were heeded


No, one really never knows! That's why I always disobey my doctor who is PRO ...

The question remains controversial ... but I am sure many really profit.

Enjoyed your ponderings on this annual theme.
Love, Margherita

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4 posted 2004-11-25 08:56 AM


My mother-in-law, age 96, could not get her flu shot this year.  She is living in fear of getting the flu, now.  I had one last year - and doubt that I will do THAT again.  The shot made me sick...

And Margherita makes a good point...

someone benefits...

ecrivan
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5 posted 2004-11-26 12:50 PM


one has to take them early, I spent a good part of Sunday afternoon just to learn it has to be done annually!


froggy
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6 posted 2004-11-27 08:28 PM


I haven't had to have a shot and hope I don't have too.
Hate getting poked in the arm,in the backside.

:-)

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Susan
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7 posted 2004-11-27 08:44 PM


Fascinating article on the flu shots - one clinic ordered theirs early in late spring - the shipment was back ordered - their cost was to be around $9 per vaccine - come fall, they ordered again - a rush - this order was sent - twenty some odd dollars per vaccine - their back order never arrived - somebody profits?  You bet -

On the other hand, good friend of mine, older, came down with the flu - the virus invaded her heart - she had to have a transplant - would the vaccine have prevented that?

So if you're in an at risk group - go for it - as for me - relatively healthy - I'll pass, thank you

Enjoyed this -

Susan

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8 posted 2004-11-27 08:45 PM


With my lung problems, I'm supposed to get a flu shot every year. They also give pneumonia shots, but they only have to be taken about every five years. I think they may benefit people who are really prone to get bad cases of the flu or pneumonia.

A well written poem, Mrtin.
Hugs,
Ethel

ecrivan
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9 posted 2004-11-27 09:10 PM


Susan

I do think the vaccine might have prevented
invasive risks..we take the shot anyway whether it costs or doesn't..


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