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JL
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since 2004-04-01
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0 posted 2004-11-23 07:11 PM



To My Soul

Reaching depth not yet analyzed
By your hand I have realized
A touch, a glow in brilliance
Forming faith in resilience
As your breviloquence
In penned word art
Opens my heart
In through my
Taught eye
To my
Core



© Copyright 2004 JL - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-11-23 07:16 PM


excellent format! yes!
DavePage
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Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-11-23 07:57 PM


I sought and sought for
Your hand
To touch me
As I
In brilliance
reached

Forming faith in resilience

At your hand

In penned word art
Opens my heart
In through my
Taught eye
To my
Core

Interesting

Dave

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
3 posted 2004-11-23 08:33 PM


Boundless to the infinite JL.
A wonderful write.
TD

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-11-23 08:39 PM


Very beautiful and great presentation!
Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Martie
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5 posted 2004-11-23 09:25 PM


Wonderful!
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2004-11-24 04:48 AM


WOW!....how artistic and passionate!
Love and hugs~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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7 posted 2004-11-24 09:30 AM


to the core of the top?  Which continually spins?

JL, you have no idea what you've just penned for me...hugs...and very very lovely.

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