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To Silent Music . . . .Senryu
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To Silent Music . . . .Senryu |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Until the last step She dances, turning, twirling, To silent music.... From this.... /pip/Forum91/HTML/001119.html and for the one who wrote it, with all the thanks I can express. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's hard to choose which is more beautiful... your poem... or the dedication that accompanies it. Both are incredible... both touch the heart deeply... both give me much to be thankful for... this week and always. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...her touching you, touching me and so the circle goes around again.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To silent music, Memories held in one's heart Minds will envision |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Martie said it perfectly Ed. I would say we all hang out in one very caring cage together  So glad she inspired you too, and thank you for that. |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
i like short poems,and this one is great! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
truly lovely! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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