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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-11-23 02:23 PM



So rare...

As if you flower to the
Udumbara's time.

Three thousand years.

And still I wait for
only you.

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-11-23 03:39 PM


Exquisite!!

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2004-11-23 03:58 PM


Zenfully beautiful.

Love & Light,
Linda
Flower

Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2004-11-23 04:26 PM


So precious,
so patient,
so overwhelmingly beautiful

your soul!

Three thousand years.

We wait
we touch
we wait
we trust

the beauty so rare
so precious

you, the flower
blooming in my soul
who knows you
since forever

Three thousand years.

So rare
YOU.


I love your inspiring poem, dear Eric, and
I love you.
Margherita

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-11-23 07:22 PM


awesome!
DavePage
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5 posted 2004-11-23 09:41 PM


And they called him "He who must be obeyed".

Nice words Eric, very nice

Dave

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-11-23 11:21 PM


Enjoyed...James
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