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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-11-23 03:14 AM



It is late at night,
and I wait here,
with open arms,

Being forever yours,
faithfully,
I turn out the light,

In hopes that you'll
send your love,
along the wire,

Even though we are,
world's apart,
we can make it through
loves fire,

anyway you want it,
I can give it,
Love'in, touch'in, squeeze'in,
so Don't stop belive'in,

Look to the wheel in the sky,
Me, you will be see'in,
We both know that only the young survive,
Don't stop believe'in,
give our love another try,

This Girl can't help it,
that shes, totally in love
with you,

who's crying now?,
ask the lonely,
they will tell you,
but I have you,

So when you listen to Journey,
follow the music,
it will lead you to the
center of my heart,

Your journey awaits...
now is the time to start.


Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


© Copyright 2004 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

1 posted 2004-11-23 04:21 AM


Very good and very clever, i really like this poem...it has that certain ellement ...mmm..i wonder what it could be? Thank you...

love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxx

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-11-23 04:39 AM


very song-like
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2004-11-23 12:40 PM


WOW!  
My soul is stirred, for sure.
You make it all sound so easy, and you are as your username implies:
a Romantic Heart.

Great write.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2005-02-15 06:39 PM


Enjoyed...James
TexUS
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since 2003-03-20
Posts 228

5 posted 2005-03-18 12:09 PM


Oh, this was awesome!



Journey was my absolute FAVORITE when I was a teen...many years ago...

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