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stevebrklynnyc
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0 posted 2004-11-23 01:04 AM


The good of man comes in many faces
Most of the time, it is only courtesy
To a select few, we pass day to day
All of sudden, they want to say

I spend most of the year dealing with liars
All of a sudden there has to be redemption
They have to make up for the lack of feeling
Commercial's brainwash their way of thinking

How come when the time is near
All of sudden, they have no fear
Guilty conscience, I don’t know, better to be honest and take your chances
Try acting normal, it's just the calendar here

Once a year the facade takes hold
Hoping the cure is within a time of rejoicing
Hollow fake promises are made within
He or she definitely knows, who has been naughty and who has been nice

Hide behind your daily lies
Just because it's time to spend money
Doesn't mean you have to be phony
Listen to you heart instead, write that check
Hope it does not float
Or else you will be in that sinking boat

"What we have here is a failure to communicate"  From the movie "Cool hand luke", one of my favorites;

© Copyright 2004 Stephen Capp - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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1 posted 2004-11-23 02:12 PM


Powerful write.

Eric

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-11-28 05:33 AM


I agree with Eric
yes

RSWells
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3 posted 2004-11-28 11:27 AM


Well I certainly agree. I used to get bent out of shape by my fellow capitalists this time of year, the race for a parking space, the shopping carts stabbed into my heels, the shorter-than usual tempers displayed in road rage. But now, and particularly after this farcical election, I just laugh. Enjoyed

[This message has been edited by RSWells (11-28-2004 12:10 PM).]

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