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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2004-11-22 01:25 PM



Upon
a grassy knoll
spawned
insanity’s role
evil
raged
horrendous toll
before
the caisson’s roll

©November 22, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-11-22 01:26 PM


well done, enjoyed this
DavePage
Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
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2 posted 2004-11-22 02:02 PM


Yes I like it

Dave

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-11-22 05:36 PM


indeed!
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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4 posted 2004-11-23 02:26 PM


well done Vas.  
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