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JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA

0 posted 2004-11-22 12:40 PM



Dawning of a New Day

You are the constant in the word memoir.
Constantly reminding me
what I am, should be, and certainly could be…

If I would have, and would now be listening…

I am filled to the brim, of your pages chronicling
me…

I just hadn’t arrived, in my mind, ready for dealing.
Not until urging the gentle ones to be free,
readying for a void in their own history…

I am now watching that dawn
A brighter sun rising…

© Copyright 2004 JL - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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1 posted 2004-11-22 12:44 PM


I am now watching that dawn
A brighter sun rising…


Lovely JL!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-11-22 01:33 PM


drink it kiddo, take a great big gulp...and keep on drinking forever...

A very touching write.

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-11-22 02:06 PM


Thoughtful, invocative, deceptively nudging

Dave

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2004-11-22 05:40 PM


beautiful
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-11-22 05:50 PM


"I am now watching that dawn
A brighter sun rising…"

Very nicely said...much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
6 posted 2004-11-22 10:16 PM


Super good JL.
TD

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2004-11-23 01:15 PM


This was so positive and uplifting, it speaks volumes to my heart...

Thank you
love and hugs~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


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