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RSWells
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0 posted 2004-11-22 12:16 PM



That 42 degree day found the Merrimack
full and towering Red Maple's broad
leaves mostly fallen and burnt in death.
Yet some splay in rust with yellow veins.

A pair of New Hampshire state employees
walked off the late lunch of the near
retired, past Franklin Pierce's grave
as cool winds ushered on November's debris.

One reach down to snag a leaf from the
low growing Checkerberry, pinching it
to draw it's wintergreen scent.

A slightly warmer Scranton found young
mothers pass the last school hours in
Nay Aug Park. Littered with dark brown
acorns it's Northern Red Oak skirted

with deep furrowed bark, branches still
clinging to most it's bright red, sharp
point leaves. Large Fothergilla shrubs
display blue-green and russet leaves.

Two boys play hooky in the tallest oak
after tiring of skipping rocks across
the Lackawanna River.

A third generation dairy farmer sat quiet
on an Appalachian ridge over Henry Lake.
He lean against the marbled trunk of a
Paperbark Maple and watched the V shaped

valley for a deer. In the lower 47 degree
vale on loamy soil grew Wintersweet, sparsely
displaying sulpher yellow flowers. He drew
on his Lucky Strike not caring if he saw prey.

He was content with the fragrance and
peace of his beloved Tennessee.

In Dallas it was 58 degrees.
A limousine sped to a hospital
with a dead man and his pretty wife.

© Copyright 2004 Richard S. Wells jr. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-11-22 12:29 PM


RSWells
A fine painting, painted with a worded brush

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2004-11-22 12:31 PM


i almost forgot; thanks for reminding
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2004-11-22 12:31 PM


this speaks of how even in beauty there can be such sadness also.  Enjoyed much sir, outstanding.
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4 posted 2004-11-22 02:29 PM


I remember this one well, and also as I had said once before, remember where I was that day.  I was forever changed, as was America I believe.  Very poignant Richard.
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5 posted 2004-11-22 02:35 PM



You must realize how much
I appreciate the fact that
We are allowed to repost
those pieces that are timely,
and never forgotten.

Thank you, Richard, for this...again.

Martie
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6 posted 2004-11-22 03:12 PM


Richard

Thank you for reposting this....less we forget.  

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7 posted 2004-11-22 05:34 PM


dang
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2004-11-22 06:07 PM


I remember this..and the impact it had on me.
It still does.
Well done sir.
Thank you for reposting.

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9 posted 2004-11-23 10:35 AM


Excellent, poignant write... thank you. *S*
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