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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2004-11-22 01:42 AM


Staring at passing cumulus,
wishing to fly free
above these wicked western winds,
seeking to be as a mindful mist
kissed by sweetest sunrise,
pulling back the blackest veils of night,
blowing breaths of fresh air
over blanketed boughs of life’s burdens.

I am saturated, drink the day
embraced by candled mountaintops
ensconced within luminescent beams,
projectiles of sunlight invite me
to dance the rainbow’s dream
in soulful surround sound

welcoming a new day

as caressing winds urge me
to climb beyond these self-made ceilings,
above the tree tops I forested long ago.

Yet as fingertips stretch themselves taut,
I hear myself shout

resiliency be damned!

and find myself again resigned
to abide within this earthly realm,
though it be mere molten magma,
until beyond this life’s battlegrounds
I dare step upon the next passing cloud,

thus relieving myself
of this transient mindset.
*


© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Krawdad
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1 posted 2004-11-22 02:33 AM


You?
Relieved of it?

This reminds of "Wandering Angus".

I enjoy your ephemorality, if but vicarously.

e

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2 posted 2004-11-22 04:02 AM


I'm excited for you, sweet lady!


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3 posted 2004-11-22 10:34 AM


Krawdad-e have you any idea where that reply led me? Thanking you, for I had somehow overlooked Yeats, and do not remember reading the Angus poem. Perhaps I am part Sidhe? I owe you big time, for this,  for you've triggered a whole chain of other musings I buried in my mind's dark corner long ago.
Perhaps the affinity for this wandering mindset helps to explain my attraction to the old song 'Wayfaring Stranger? and similar tunes of constantly travelling spirits?

Dixie, not sure why anyone would be excited about my wanderlustful soul, but thanks for reading. LOL, I don't suppose I'll ever stay put for long until my final forever comes.
But I'm not intending to move again just yet...but ask me in a year or two?

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4 posted 2004-11-22 01:01 PM


Well I am excited too - so there!  You are free to do whatever, and go wherever your two feet take you, and in it is always an adventure I somewhat envy.

As you say here,  welcoming a new day

and always making the very best of it.  Take care Kacy, and don't forget to write us along your way.  

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5 posted 2004-11-22 01:10 PM


ahhh...and when you come to that place of happiness, come and let us know Kacy. Hugs and go in peace dear gal.
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6 posted 2004-11-22 01:24 PM


I am saturated, drink the day
embraced by candled mountaintops
ensconced within luminescent beams,
projectiles of sunlight invite me
to dance the rainbow’s dream
in soulful surround sound


beatiful~

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7 posted 2004-11-22 02:08 PM


Yes - really like this

Dave

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8 posted 2004-11-22 06:37 PM


I can dig it...you keep stepping high,low or whatever works at the time.It seems to me that both the king and pawns end up in the same box once the games over.

Live like it's your last day...
Dance like nobody's watching...
Love like you've never been hurt...

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9 posted 2004-11-22 11:10 PM


I swear you were Marco Polo in a previous life.  Your energy amazes me.  But then, I was a sloth in a previous life, so I'm easily impressed by that sorta thing.  
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10 posted 2004-11-24 12:57 PM


Sent you on a trip, eh?
How appropriate, and you are welcome.
Sit still too long and one can lose all sense of direction.

Just got a couple of books on or by Yeats.  Hope to learn more about what might be behind "Wandering Angus" (one of my favorites).

e


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11 posted 2004-11-24 01:20 AM


LOL, yes, you sent me all the way back in time actually, to the origins of Druidry, and part of my soul's heritage from across the seas. *sigh* Happy readings
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