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She Looked at Me
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She Looked at Me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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She Looked at Me She looked at me and spoke my name It red my skin to sheer chagrin It touched me like a fires flame That burned me in the grip of sin It squeezed my heart the tender part A shock of pain of long sustain And rushed the run of blood to dart To wrap my brain in dark refrain Yet I was cold within its fold And shivered in its wake of price And wrapped my cloak to twice enfold To stay me from that look of ice The wind did blow the mist of snow To blind me in its feel of awe Engulfing me from head to toe And sending me to nevermore She touched me with a look of tell That sent me into living hell |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
OMG....the "Look!" LOL... Unfortunately, Moms and Wives do that...   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You are a clever love.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When impaired by eyes of dagger and dart ... only one thing will make the "look" impart. No need to beg, nor borrow, nor steal ... no falling to knees in forgiving appeal. When looks could kill, you will live to tell ... Just blame it ALL on Randy and then run like hell.   It red my skin to sheer chagrin and that will be my waaaay cooool line of the day. *ww*   "this medium is over taken by keyboard prophets who believe their every word profound." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, LOL and that is my laugh for the day. Winkiewinkie |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yep i know that look, it married me...... anyhow you bring the sun to sunday warm wishes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Yes it is an ac dc look. LOL |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Yeah! Got it more times than I care to remember. Good one. Thanks, Melton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melton, Me too, thanks for the read and reply. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
an ac dc look..had to laugh at that... you do tell it well, Sy M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Well it could be either or. LOL |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy This made me smile for awhile!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie A smile is a smile. |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
I have had my fair share of those looks, and sometimes its no fun, lol. Thanks for the read, Steve. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Steve, Glad you enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sorry I missed this one, glad I got it now |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
I can say the same Passing.. Very well written and very glad I saw it  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you for not missing it. Broken_Winged_Ang, Thank you for the kind comment. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, oh! You're under her spell now and must do her bidding! ~ or else! Take care! lol ~ Sending a warm loving smile your way, Earth Angel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Sixty two years I'm under her spell, Enough already. LOL |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Cross your eyes, and stick out your tongue? It will at least gets her thinking - then just run Sy .........> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I left a message on this before???? Just came back for another looksie and poof...it's not there???? Oh well...Sy, again, you are a master with words.... Enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thanks I missed you. |
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