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ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

0 posted 2004-11-21 01:11 AM

Out to make a final sale
A pitch thrown to no avail
Do dungeons have clear glass windows
where life flies by on headphones
to make it look good for quality control
wrap up more deals and on the roll
reems of lines thrown for pitch to catch
whatever deal for the listener to grasp

shades stay pulled on this sales den
on inbound calls
the horror of a duped final dale
a dilemma of sun and hale
all for a noxious pitch
the final sale
freedom curtailed
to make it look good for quality control
wrap up more deals and on the roll

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

1 posted 2004-11-21 01:18 AM

Are you trying to sell me something?....hmmm.
nicely done.

Jason

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-11-21 01:47 AM

Ah yes, - the sales pitch - yet where would we be without snake oil?

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2004-11-21 10:52 AM

I could never "pitch a sale"...I don't take rejection well~~

M

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

4 posted 2004-11-21 01:05 PM

As a salesman of over twenty years I enjoyed this quick ripping aside of the showroom curtain.

Most thinking (certainly all feeling) people must get disgusted on occasion with the deceit necessary to justify capitalism.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2004-11-22 07:01 PM

even the same salesperson can get disgusted when on the other side of the phone...

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

6 posted 2004-11-23 01:32 PM

Hi Martin,
I love this piece.
I found a a way to end sales calls over the phone.I just go online LOL. :-)

Have a good one my friend

Within this heart you'll find love

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2004-11-23 02:10 PM

Great write!

Eric

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