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Annie Shadow
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since 2004-05-02
Posts 27
Drifting

0 posted 2004-11-20 11:53 PM



Two circles
One inside
Falling down
They’re side by side

It’s an old dream
It’s a teardrop
It's the chaos
It’s the hope that you might stop

Oh no, Honey,

I’ve got my fingers crossed
But that still gets me lost…

It’s like burning
It’s a headlight
Take my balance
It’s the wrong right

It’s a murder
It’s a calice
It’s the chaos
It’s our palace

It’s an open hearted
Never started situation,
With no hesitation…
You say yes
Then happiness...
Becomes another
Form of cover
For the problems
For the problems that we hide…
Two circles
One inside

Oh…
Ooohhh….

It’s two circles
One inside
Sweetest knowledge
Be my guide

It’s a pillow
It’s a mirror
It’s a promise
It’s the hope that you might hear...

Oh no, Honey,

I’ve got my fingers crossed
But that still gets me lost…

It’s the distance
I've been falling
It’s the tunnel
You've been crawling

It’s a murder
It’s a calice
It’s the chaos
It’s our palace…

Yeah…oh...yeah
It’s an open hearted
Never started situation,
With no hesitation…
You say yes
Then happiness...
Becomes another
Form of cover
For the problems
For the problems that we hide…
Two circles
One inside

Spinning round and round
Round and round again
Spinning round
It’s a dead end



[This message has been edited by Annie Shadow (11-21-2004 02:45 PM).]

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-11-21 05:23 AM


this could be a song
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
2 posted 2004-11-21 09:19 AM


i'm dizzy
you spun me through the wash and dry cycle all in one voyage
thanks (i think

*Alli4000*
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The World of Poetry
3 posted 2004-11-21 05:23 PM


Yes, sounds like a song.  Loved it!

~Alli~

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