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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-11-20 04:58 PM


Comes under the heading of dont lose your temper when eating

Dave

Raspberry jam looks nice on the wall
Jelly just calls it quits
Sphagetti is easily led
Whilst lasagna just gets on
Interior design
And can be quite a bind
So I leave mine to the pets
They have inspiration and tips
Including fried bacon
And seed forsaken
And with me they are instant hits


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Susan
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walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-11-20 08:20 PM


Jam certainly does best jelly

Enjoyed - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-11-21 05:27 AM


giggling

yes, this is darling

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2004-11-21 11:18 AM


funny thing about anger and temper tantrums...

I would never throw nor waste anything nor wish to break or stain anything material over an emotion...

now stomping my foot is another thing~~

*s
M

DavePage
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4 posted 2004-11-21 04:18 PM


Thanks

Dave

Broken_Winged_Angel
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Small Town, Somewhere
5 posted 2004-11-22 05:20 AM


*laughs*

Thanks for sharing this

babygirlwlove
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New York City
6 posted 2004-11-22 01:15 PM


oh my!

lol..enjoyed...
**babygiRL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

LeeJ
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7 posted 2004-11-22 01:18 PM


boy oh boy, I remember once when I was young
errrr, younger....hehe
and I was company for dinner...the father didn't like what the mother had cooked, and he threw it against the wall....I will never ever forget that...it left a horrible implant...after that, I didn't like him very much.

Yes, agree whole heartidly with the otehr comments...

thank you for sharing.  sorry, I know you probably didn't mean this so seriously....

DavePage
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8 posted 2004-11-22 01:49 PM


Thanks all for your comments.

Lee

You know I write from imagination but dont for whatever's sake stop making forthright comments to me.

Have a look at the final Barnes rewrite, it is the final rewrite of half an idea that has taken years and still at some point is part of a long story that I will write but again, it is not my story, just images.

Thanks once again to everyone.

Dave

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