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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-11-20 09:37 AM

you were a highway last night
wearing black thigh highs
with bot dot diamond seams
never realized how far
you went toward heaven

til I was on my way back
glide sliding the iron one
and she didn't want to go
guess she just knows how
my mind would rather touch you

then spend a night with her

you were the trees of 33 last night
hem high reveal of your upbringing
but you said you are trying to change
into something more comfortable
and you don't mind the eyes of men

just them getting off on you
and getting into your soft sand
leaving their tattoos and beer behind
and even though I will still love you
it is just the idea of your virginity

and you ought to have some say

you were the western sky last night
in indigo with a whisper or two
just enough to cover your moon
and you grin at how I try to see
even blow against the horizon

to make the clouds move
but they will in time you say
if I just spend the time
like I did last night
between your purple mountains

and this morning loving your dawn
______________
dark

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-11-20 09:42 AM

a very soft, silent, wow....

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2004-11-20 09:55 AM

"you were the western sky last night
in indigo with a whisper or two
just enough to cover your moon
and you grin at how I try to see
even blow against the horizon

to make the clouds move
but they will in time you say
if I just spend the time
like I did last night
between your purple mountains

and this morning loving your dawn"

my goodness I do love it when you write like this....soft looks gooooood on you D

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

3 posted 2004-11-20 09:58 AM

love how your love moves in you

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-11-20 10:03 AM

I think this is one of my favorites - though that is hard to say because each is a favorite -

I find myself sinking into this one - like the soft waves of the ocean wraping its liquid love around you - beautiful-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-11-20 10:05 AM

satiny

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