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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2004-11-20 07:16 AM

Chemistry

We’re born within a bubbles sphere
The chemistry of earths endear
A delicate cocoon of place
With mental flights to outer space

With dreams of fancy for a wile
That often makes my face to smile
The agony and ecstasy
With spare dimensions fantasy

On the wings of me, I sigh
Sailing eons bails of sky
Changing in the discontent
A micron in the firmament

A smile that goes from ear to ear
In wit to fit the deadly fear
In knowledge of the endless bend
The chain of chaining end to end

Its sound and fury mark you well
With neither heaven nor a hell

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-11-20 07:35 AM

On the wings of me, I sigh
Sailing eons bails of sky
Changing in the discontent
A micron in the firmament

A smile that goes from ear to ear
In wit to fit the deadly fear
In knowledge of the endless bend
The chain of chaining end to end

~*~

Oh, this chemistry has me bubbling!
The ching and chime of this rhyme,
will keep me smiling through all time!

Super

Sy....

Thank for this dearling...

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2004-11-20 08:11 AM

A smile that goes from ear to ear
In wit to fit the deadly fear
In knowledge of the endless bend
The chain of chaining end to end

wonderful rhyme and reasoning

M

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-11-20 09:22 AM

Loved your words of wisdom this morn Sy.
Have time for a cup of tea with me?

~Morning hugs, Nancy~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2004-11-20 10:00 AM

your meter (that bounce

thing) is always so perfect

I wish I could do that. Always a pleasure to read you Seymour

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-11-20 10:03 AM

yep, gotta agree with Sea here

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2004-11-20 01:46 PM

We’re born within a bubbles sphere
The chemistry of earths endear
A delicate cocoon of place
With mental flights to outer space

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

that verse alone is worth poetic gold...
I do so love what you do with symbols and personifi....

With dreams of fancy for a wile
That often makes my face to smile

yeppers...thats what your rhymes do...
bring a smile to me face and heart.

and of course *winkies* too.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-11-20 02:24 PM

Enjoyed this - would like to loose myself in the base elements of fantasy sometimes -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2004-11-20 03:08 PM

Woah! I agree with Sea too! The flow is perfect! Enjoyed~

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2004-11-21 02:55 PM

Dear Seymour, this is precious! You really have extraordinary talent and always give us something to ponder on.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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