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For Whom You Write |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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For Whom You Write It is for him, that intangible person You’ve not yet met, but he has Always circled the axis Of your thoughts. It is for him That you quill your deepest secrets, Your strongest desires, Whispering ancient secrets Not even known to you ~ Before he embraced Your mind. He has always been there, A faceless presence in Strong-armed dreams Of nighttime flights, with Ingenious personified, a Man strapped by grace and dignity Wrapped in silk cloak and Dark shadows But a unique being, He is every man’s inner self, one He cannot by design present In public, but the one who lives In his heart and soul For what is woman. It is he, who bends in the wind, To hear her sounds triumphant, Who perseveres to bring her Over any obstacle. In gentleness, he soothes, By compassion, he argues for all rights For all people. Only his mind Can best his own attempts, So his will power is stronger. He is who he is. He visits my dreams. I write my soul for him. It is minor payment duly returned. Circa 5-22-02 Reposted, revised 11-19-04 Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissy....I missed seeing this before...so glad you reposted...now tell me "It is for him" How did you know?  |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
very moving.. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I don't know, the way I see it he owes you. Well done, dream on. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think I missed this one glad you reposted! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
SIL, Hi! I've been missing your poetry so I had to take a look tonight. Muse imspired me things, or perhaps, Ranier. Hope all is well...you and brother have been in my prayers. .....jo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
every little girl dreams that santa dream and tiptoes to the stairway to see him bring her the gifts she needs more than wants but wants oh so badly and for whom do your write enjoyed this ms sun |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Into the grail cup. Wow! and...YES! TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very beautiful, precious write, dear Karilea! Your pen captured the pure essence of that particular truth so well. I will keep this. Love, Margherita |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"It is for him That you quill your deepest secrets, Your strongest desires, Whispering ancient secrets" That part is true for sure!  Like this poem alot!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent! Your talent for mingling word and thought are perfect. Enjoyed Sunshine. JL |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Took my breath away this one did. Marvelous write - simply marvelous. |
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