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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2004-11-19 08:51 PM



Perspective keys a deadbolt misconception
Through cotton candy fog perpetual around the rosy road
What comes in the patterning of raindrops?
Sorrow or joy, dissipates in the heat of new found
Reeling thread still tucked within the brighter times
The gypsy in me gathers bits of vibrant cloth upon my walking stick
Traveled light, in barefoot fields, returning to the blooms of plant
Thrown into winds auspicious, scant and free
Once known of sun, still shines…still brings to cloudy minds
The vision of a banquet set upon the grass
And memories make warm November pass
The painting of tomorrow seeks remark
Unbuttoned feelings float mosaics arch
To land, the ringing bells resume embark
And find me pushing paper boats along the stream serene

Copyright Kkh 11/19/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-11-19 08:59 PM


The gypsy in me gathers bits of vibrant cloth upon my walking stick

~*~

I like this....
I would also love to know what your middle name might be...

another "K"

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2 posted 2004-11-19 09:41 PM


what a scene
EagleScorpion
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3 posted 2004-11-19 10:10 PM


yes. very nice. well well rendered
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4 posted 2004-11-19 10:39 PM


So beautifully penned Kathleen.
Very much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2004-11-19 11:10 PM


And find me pushing paper boats along the stream serene

look over your shoulder...i'm there too with you

~K~
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6 posted 2004-11-20 03:06 AM


"The painting of tomorrow seeks remark" (!)


I loved this poem. I loved it's carefree nature, spilling truths in golden rivers.

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7 posted 2004-11-20 02:55 PM


lovely write...

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JL
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8 posted 2004-11-20 04:04 PM


"To land, the ringing bells resume embark
And find me pushing paper boats along the stream serene"


I do agree, beautiful scenic poetry.

JL

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