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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2004-11-19 08:27 PM


Beyond us, moons and souls abroad,
And sprites, a glimmering sun.
Mushrooms dance in choirs of lore,
the fairy gods, they run.
Earthbound creatures watch the moon.
Wondering, watching, waiting soon.

My prayers are none but wordless thoughts,
My faith, a beggar's shadow.
Through ages, some recall in tears,
And fools, a tally's sparrow.
In all that remains, and nonetheless.
Narrow minds dont see.
While wanderers, they beguile in jest,
"Tears in the rain are we."

What remains, it will be seen,
But what, I just dont know.
But if I get the chance to leave,

elsewhere shall i go

© Copyright 2004 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-11-19 09:03 PM


Joseph...this is wonderful!  One of the best of yours I have ever read!  I would like to see this one in publication!
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-11-19 09:31 PM


yes, I agree with Sunshine!
inkedgoddess
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Ohio
3 posted 2004-11-19 10:09 PM


yes, agreed, it's full of joy
Martie
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California
4 posted 2004-11-19 10:14 PM


Me too!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-11-19 10:41 PM


How wonderful this is!!!
fantastic write Joe!
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

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