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In Lieu of Meteors

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 11-19-2004 08:02 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


The planet Venus
especially bright tonight
while the crescent moon
seems lost in dream

Out of the east
with his starry belt askew
Orion rising from the sea

© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-19-2004 09:05 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

John, thank you for this.  
I wish I had a clear sky tonight,
just to see.
EagleScorpion
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2 posted 11-19-2004 09:26 PM       View Profile for EagleScorpion   Email EagleScorpion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleScorpion

cute. to the see stars in space would be a beautiful thing.. now im inspired to write something, DOH!
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3 posted 11-19-2004 09:34 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I love your titles!

awesome write!
iliana
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4 posted 11-20-2004 12:37 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

I really like your style.  I read a few others of yours and really enjoy them.
Huan Yi
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Thanks everyone.

iliana,

Appreciate your comment.  Unlike other
sites, it's not possible to know how many
have actually read something without
commenting.

Thanks again

John

Michael
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6 posted 11-20-2004 01:14 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Orion rising over the mountain on my way home tonight was spectacular.
~DreamChild~
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maginfiscent view in my mind's eye now. well done!
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8 posted 11-20-2004 02:55 PM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

short and sweet...

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I read it  and it is beautiful, again beautiful.

 
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