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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-11-19 05:00 PM

Now that they're bare again,
i can lay down among them
in the cradel of their curvature,
feeling nakedly newborn
exposing my womanhood as
as i slip within heaven's view,
washing clean as the clouds repent,
slither wet round their smoothness,
as the creator shies eyes from me,
while i smile o so coyly
flashing head throws of golden mane,

now that they've stripped themselves
beneath views of ascention,
i can truly lock souls with theirs,
let them harvest my body,
as i've labored my storms through them,
laughing free as a sinner,
blushing pure as a virgin.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (11-20-2004 07:02 PM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2004-11-19 05:38 PM

Druids... were centered around the spirits of trees...

and I often feel those connections myself, but not like you are able to write ma'am....
as much as the river speaks to me, maybe more...it is you and trees that grace us with words that one can climb into and feel...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-11-19 05:55 PM

You write of the trees so well Michele..
This is one gorgeous write!
Hugs~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-11-19 09:41 PM

yes, free

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

4 posted 2004-11-19 10:07 PM

oh ok i didnt realize this was about trees.. i had a whole different picture going in my head woo! (*fans self)

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

5 posted 2004-11-19 10:08 PM

one time i thought i was a tree for three hours. this was the night before the first day of the iraq war. how that has ANYTHING to do with it, i dont know, but yeah.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2004-11-21 02:18 PM

i can truly lock souls with theirs,
let them harvest my body,
as i've labored my storms through them,
laughing free as a sinner,
blushing pure as a virgin.

Just these days I embraced a beautiful tree and felt a strong connection too ...

You have expressed your "relationship" so incredibly intensely, dear Michelle.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2004-11-21 06:07 PM

thanks for reading and seeing their beautify w/me

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-11-22 04:47 AM

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

9 posted 2004-11-22 05:21 AM

Beautiful. Written almost as though you had become one with the tree

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2004-11-22 10:38 AM

My gawwwwd, you sure can write!!!!!!!!! You put the "A" in amazing! You truly are a goddess worthy of the gods! ~ and I bet they all have smiles on their faces when you bare your all! lol

EA

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