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vandana
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0 posted 2004-11-19 02:33 PM



It doesn't matter
What we do?
It doesn't matter
What we think ?
To the summer days and nights
It doesn't matter,
If the sky so blue and grey
It doesn't matter,
If rainy days turned
Into sunny days,
The stormy weather turned out to be,
It doesn't matter,
The world will be the same,
The world will never change
If you call my name,
Remember me,
At those moments
To the matter of time,
It doesn't matter,
If you stay
Or leave on time,
It doesnt matter
But you never know
When it does matter
When it comes to life,
To the matter of life,
matter of life,
It's just matter,
But it doesn't matter
if you just think yourself
And never learn to think for others,
It doesn't matter,
Who might think for,
Or you think
It doesn't matter at all,
Before you fall,
Or you call,
It doesn't matter,

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-11-19 02:35 PM


"The world will be the same,
The world will never change
If you call my name,
Remember me,
At those moments
To the matter of time"

Well done Vandana!  Good to read you today!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-11-19 02:36 PM


vandana
Good one, enjoyed the read.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2004-11-19 02:39 PM


But you, my dear, DO matter!

Good to read your words again on the subject of love!


Linda

JL
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4 posted 2004-11-19 02:51 PM


I agree with Earth Angel
Great write vandana.
This is a special write, and a keeper.

JL


passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-11-19 09:45 PM


so well done! I loved it!
Sunshine
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6 posted 2004-11-19 09:58 PM


If you call my name,
Remember me

~*~

Such poignant lines, Vandana...
so good to see you posting again my friend...
I have missed you!

Margherita
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7 posted 2004-11-21 03:33 PM



It doesn't matter ... or does it?

Sometimes we pretend it does not matter, but our heart knows better.

Beautiful and incisive write.

Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2004-11-22 06:34 PM


You know whats beautifull...when two people can finally decide that they want to be together...simply because they miss each other when they are apart...James
Ericc
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9 posted 2004-11-23 02:13 PM


Wow...awesome write!

Eric

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10 posted 2004-11-23 02:22 PM


good to see you gal, well done.
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