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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-11-19 08:03 AM


The Kettles Sweat

The morning still
The kettles
Spill
Dew drops of
The dawning’s
Fill
The firmament
Of eons
Pour
And I am drunk
Forever
More

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2004-11-19 08:05 AM


nice.. Sy... very nice...

enjoyed this...

Toerag
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2 posted 2004-11-19 08:08 AM


Sy....drunk forever more?...you too?...join the club...you'll get used to it though...I've only been "high" once in my life....(haven't come down since)...oh wait, that's not what ya meant...well done and interesting write Sigh...how ya been?....you still taking those poetry vitamins I see...
Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-11-19 08:37 AM



I heard the whistle
of the kettle sing,
let's see who else
this ditty may bring...


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-11-19 09:15 AM


Can we make Chai tea with that water Sy?
I could hear your kettle whistle all the way up here in Canada.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2004-11-19 10:28 AM


very lovely Sey, good morning.
NewEnglandlazurlu
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6 posted 2004-11-19 10:32 AM


A very interesting write Sy. I too heard the kettle resonating through the mountains here in NH.

hugs, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

vandana
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7 posted 2004-11-19 02:18 PM


nice read
Earth Angel
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8 posted 2004-11-19 02:24 PM


Howdy!

I too, am delightfully drunk on dawn's dew drops!

A sip or two for me and you!

Wrapping you in my downy feathers,
EA

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9 posted 2004-11-19 08:13 PM


nicely said, Pa Kettle!
passing shadows
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10 posted 2004-11-19 09:35 PM


ah...a different form for you

it looks good on you, yes

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