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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-11-19 06:35 AM



Cold wind blows,
upon my window sill,
As I lay underneath,
warm covers, thermals on,
silently still,

Warm and cozy,
all snuggled like
a mouse,
As the snowflakes fall,
pilling one by one,
upon my house,

Frosted window panes,
remind me of my heart,
Will sunshine ever come
again?

Will winters chill ever end,
love so warm, enter in,
and make the coldness
depart,

Who will get cozy with me?,
underneath my warm layers of love,
melting away the frosted ice,
from my window panes,

Allowing sunshine to warm me
once again,peel back my layers,
see my bare, naked heart,

I have warm layers of love,
to cover your every part....

© Copyright 2004 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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1 posted 2004-11-19 06:44 AM


A lovely loving poem of warmth and beauty, from a heart to match.

I will get cozy with you....while the flakes fall silently...

Thank you for this fine poem

Love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2004-11-19 07:11 AM


Phil,
Bring your thermals....and melt away the frosted ice....

Hot chocolate later....

You would be cozy inside my heart full of warm, fluffy love....

Love ~VQ

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2004-11-19 10:26 AM


This is soft and warm like a cozy blanket.  Well done, enjoyed.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2004-11-19 11:16 PM


Lovely...James
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-11-20 11:19 AM


precious
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6 posted 2004-11-20 02:59 PM


Delightful read! Amazing...

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garysgirl
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7 posted 2004-11-20 03:06 PM


This is beautiful, ARH.
Nice, warm, and cuddly!!
Hugs,

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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8 posted 2004-11-20 03:54 PM


"Will winters chill ever end,
love so warm, enter in,
and make the coldness
depart,

Who will get cozy with me?,
underneath my warm layers of love,
melting away the frosted ice,
from my window panes,"


Eeeee-yaow!  
Had to read this several times.  
Now I need a cool-off period!
Too exciting.

JL


DavePage
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9 posted 2004-11-20 04:01 PM


I think this is great

Dave

Shelley
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10 posted 2004-11-25 11:51 PM


you won't have trouble finding someone to get cozy with .... with expressions like this... no trouble at all!

very nice

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