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~DreamChild~
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in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-19 02:48 AM



you know, it's a bother to write this.
it's hard now even to think.
it's not too much fun,
quite hard to be done:
expressing myself in ink.

perhaps if i had some pencils,
i could draw a picture for you.
a picture's worth
a thousand words.
but that's something i just can't do.

so, since i can color no portrait
(the likes that your eyes can see),
i'll write a few words,
but a thousand? absurd!
would you settle for eighty-three?

" Now what do you THINK about that? "
          

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1 posted 2004-11-19 01:41 PM


Derrick~
This is simply precious~
AND ... I think '83' is just about perfect~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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JL
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2 posted 2004-11-19 07:13 PM


And a perfect 83 too.

JL


SPIRIT
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3 posted 2004-11-19 07:27 PM


Seems 83 is just the ticket.
~DreamChild~
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in your dreams
4 posted 2004-11-19 11:23 PM


lol . thx guys!

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