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Tim
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0 posted 2004-11-18 11:58 PM


Behold, what vision this that greets my eyes?
Upon blue screen, in pixelled glory there?
She is I think, as splendored as night skies
Aglow with stars, a glorious beauty rare,
How can this be, such pulchritude my view,
Before me sits, no touch of her I feel,
No scent of her my senses to imbue
With essence of her soul, is she not real?
If not, how can I ache her presence deep
How can she cause emotions dead to stir?
As from a trance, she calls from cyber's keep'
From in my heart, why do I call to her?
Alas, she is but a phantom calling,
From out my past, a dream recalling.


T'was surfing and came across a 55 Chevy Belaire,
unfortunately the asking price was about a hundred times what I paid for mine shortly after my sixteenth birthday.

[This message has been edited by Tim (11-19-2004 12:16 AM).]

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1 posted 2004-11-19 12:06 PM


such passion...for a car....
must be a real beauty. get a fixer upper...and fix her up, then the cost won't be all at once

Susan
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2 posted 2004-11-19 12:19 PM


Grinning at this - ah classic cars - mmmmm

Susan

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Huan Yi
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3 posted 2004-11-19 06:39 AM



nice

Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-11-19 07:02 AM


LOL...Tim, let me know when you're ready for the next car show - you can see my spouse's 49 Chevy Fleetline that he's quite proud of...and a few other hot and heavy's on display...

as for the poem, well, it's getting easier and easier to see why you enjoy waxing poetic over the matters that stir a man's heart...

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