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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-11-18 07:10 PM



In quiet hours...I am the
words.

And the page waits to
receive me.

Grateful to be filled.


© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-11-18 08:08 PM


How quietly calming this is Eric...
Well done!

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-11-18 08:08 PM


yes, you are
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2004-11-18 09:29 PM


Smiling at PS...
YES, you are!  echoed the chorus.

Your depth of art is stunning Eric
TD

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4 posted 2004-11-18 11:37 PM


loved this so completely
~DreamChild~
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in your dreams
5 posted 2004-11-18 11:51 PM


I like short poems, especially when they say alot.

ethome
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6 posted 2004-11-19 04:39 AM


You have a wonderful name!  LOL!

I like the mood and the simplicity. Nicely done!


Eric

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7 posted 2004-11-19 10:23 AM


This is so soft and beautiful. So much said in so few words.  Brava.
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8 posted 2004-11-19 10:42 AM


I loved the calm reflective image these few words cast upon my soul this morning.

A fantastic bit of writing.

hugs, Marti

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–St. Francis of Assisi

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9 posted 2004-11-19 10:44 AM


Framing this one and hanging it on my wall...

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

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10 posted 2004-11-19 01:06 PM


Yes, you've hit the nail on the head.  Well said!
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11 posted 2004-11-19 02:19 PM


enjoyed

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12 posted 2004-11-19 02:26 PM


I am a page just waiting to come alive! lol

Write on!
Linda

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13 posted 2004-11-19 02:33 PM


Ericc
A delight to read.

Margherita
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14 posted 2004-11-20 11:05 AM



Oh ....I will be the page
receiving the caress
of your words.

I will be the white cloud
recording the dance
of your thoughts.

I will be the blue ocean
rocking your dreams
on the crest of my waves.

I will be the womb of creation
opening to your inspiration,
giving birth to new life.

I will be the heart of matter
receiving your pure spirit
to sing the tune of love.


"In quiet hours ..." you are deeply inspiring, dear Eric.

Yes, you are the words and I read you ...

and love you.
Margherita

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15 posted 2004-11-20 02:56 PM


Short and sweet; love it!

~Alli~

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16 posted 2004-11-20 04:20 PM


In the quiet hours

The toast is burning
The coffee roasted
The eggs hard

And the page waits to
receive me.

Grateful to be filled.

Nice one Eric

Dave

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