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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-11-18 05:25 PM



Meaningless Confessions

Somewhere it waits for me...
the openness needed to
bring out the restlessness
that consumes and keeps me
wound so tightly.

It is there, kept hidden,
treasured from my keep
giving me awkward moments.
My tongue tied, the knots
preventing me from saying what
my heart wishes to reveal.

And it is all up to you,
to take the reins, to allow
the freedom from hurt in this;
a fantasy world the mind dreams up.

I ramble on, day after day
expectations a thing of the past,
but wanting to dance closer, slowly,
to feel the walls come down.

Wanting your body warmth to
incite a riot, the kind that flames,
an intensity to put away all doubts
and dress me in your tomorrows.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2004 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2004-11-18 05:44 PM


Visual, intense feeling, excellent writing

Dave

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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Texas, USA
2 posted 2004-11-18 05:49 PM


This is sensual. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2004-11-18 05:50 PM


Thank you Dave...nice to see you again

M

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2004-11-18 05:51 PM


You snuck in there Nan...

I was just dreaming~~~


M

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
5 posted 2004-11-19 07:40 PM


Hummm…hum…hum…
You pen magic in your writings.
Very nice read, smooth…

JL

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-11-19 07:45 PM


Very nicely done here Maureen!!
Much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-11-19 09:37 PM


dang! you go girl!
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