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Cloud 9
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0 posted 2004-11-18 04:44 PM



I know we will argue
And i know I blow my top
But in all its worth...I still love you
That will never stop.

We may not see eye to eye
On things we do not see
There are times you won't let things be

I know you want what's best for me
And keep me out of harm
But no matter what
You are still the greatest mom!!


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DavePage
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1 posted 2004-11-18 06:03 PM


So true to life

Like it

Dave

Ericc
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2 posted 2004-11-18 06:55 PM


Wow...so easy to relate to.
And so wise.

Thanks.

Eric

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3 posted 2004-11-18 08:24 PM


that's sweet
WranglrButts9
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4 posted 2004-11-18 10:30 PM


Nice.... reminds me of somethin I wrote a while back. Mine was longer though!

Bailey

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and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

stevebrklynnyc
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5 posted 2004-11-19 10:07 PM


A mom is your very best friend in the whole world.  This poem made me call my mom, thanks.  Good job.  Steve.
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6 posted 2004-11-20 11:46 AM



Now did you show this to her?  

Margherita
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7 posted 2004-11-20 11:53 AM


This is good for every Mom's ears!

Very nice.

Love,
Margherita

Susan
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8 posted 2004-11-20 02:34 PM


Such love here - yes mother's- we love ours, we we pray our daughters will love us - you gift me a smile this morning, and warm heart tugs -

Susan

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9 posted 2004-11-20 03:10 PM


omg! this poem is so sweet! I'm adding it to my library for sure!!!

~Alli~

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JL
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10 posted 2004-11-20 03:39 PM


Reads like a Valentine
Very nice.

JL

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11 posted 2004-11-20 03:48 PM


"I know you want what's best for me
And keep me out of harm
But no matter what
You are still the greatest mom!!"

It's tough when all you want to do is protect your daughters...your ideas and theirs aren't always the same LOL but the love is always there... enjoyed this

Cloud 9
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12 posted 2004-11-22 11:08 AM


Hi everyone-
Thank you so much. Yes, I did show her this poem this weekend. She loved it. I went and spent sometime with her and brought my kids. She enjoyed the kids. Her dad lives in Ohio and we just found out this morning he is not going to make it. She is very sad.

Again, thanks everyone!!!!

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