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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-11-18 04:09 PM


I’m criticised because instead of one monolific poem I break it into smaller chunks and break the number of poems per day limitation.

Now you get the poems in one massive chunk

Dave Page

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Barnes


Music whispers sweet dreams sweeping long passion walks to hills with images calling windswept trees breezing to a torpid day to drift long grass a moment away from sublime pleasure as spinning wood inspires fragrant desire of peace courtesy of a small pond milling in a lake fishing for compliments from busy ducks fishing for compliments  as we write a dream silencing peace exulting as the sun shining on grass dreams of molten ice cream on cornets blowing trumpet voluntary of desire to our written love affair with melting papers tucked with ribbons of anguish in fire of lies and truth of desire as eyes flash lightning within your blazing gut wrenching soul, we blazed a beacon to our needs delivering hope on those easy days as we took of ourselves visions of rhythms throughout a vision of seconds in a seamless fabric dark as herded cattle to a night drenched wall we sought space as dawn awoke to a sombre richness fooling us of its glory painted by whispers we sought balm as an emerald kicking sand into a forgotten place to remember when beauty was a mindful image of knowing explored images to watch the world fail to find us but will the world leave our haven rented for your heart in peace echoing mirrors on a reflection of torn thoughts that in spring danced in buds to steal hearts in spring tilting hair to delight images flowering in winter warming the caress of the high trees touching the bark to swirl empty ideas empty words empty thoughts to a life that needs to know winter as we moved our gentle thoughts to bright fires and images in heat in the dawn rise remembering your eyes that were sculptured from the deep of blue spitting fire




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