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Open Poetry #34

Shekhinah

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2004-11-17 08:18 PM

To watch her walk
across a room
becomes.. a thought
in the way she glides

carries a poetry
more than words,...
beyond all lines
of supple rhyme.

And wonder why
you should be paused,...
man of steel
in the real world.

Why
her eyes,
when they follow yours,

make you feel
like such a fool.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-11-17 08:19 PM

beautiful

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2004-11-17 09:15 PM

sigh

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

3 posted 2004-11-18 03:10 AM

i really like your poetry.

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

4 posted 2004-11-18 06:49 AM

Derrick,

I think it more accurate to say
you like how I don’t get in the way
of poetry. Very hard thing to do,
and I usually fail.

John

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-11-18 08:37 AM

this brings warm sighs and magic to the mind..soothing write

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2004-11-18 08:40 AM

You write like a god worthy of a goddess...

Love & Light,
EA

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-11-18 09:03 AM

Very nice John.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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