SEA
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2004-11-17
06:31 PM
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I waited for you...
So sure that you’d be there my heart knew you wouldn’t forget not again..
funny...how much sound silence can make how loud the stillness can be
the unspoken screams at me forcing me to face truths I don’t want to know
but, I’ve known all along haven’t I?
my heart surrenders accepts the ache of you is forever but wallowing in it isn’t...
~SEA~
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Dark Stranger
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West Coast
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2004-11-17
06:31 PM
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ms sea.. it is good for you to ache just a bit looks lovely in your eyes
enjoyed this ms
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SEA
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2004-11-17
06:34 PM
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thanks D you are so sweet...
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Cpat Hair
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2004-11-17
06:35 PM
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some aches are bittersweet my friend...
and sometimes filling them is too...
do love the way you write it ma'am....
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SEA
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2004-11-17
06:41 PM
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thank you so much Ron...
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jwesley
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Spring, Texas
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2004-11-17
07:25 PM
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Just dropped in for a few moments and am glad I did. This is beautiful SEA - one of those "I wish I had written" things.
Applause to you my friend.
Jimmy
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Cloud 9
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Ca
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2004-11-17
07:50 PM
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Great poem....
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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
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2004-11-17
07:52 PM
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funny...how much sound silence can make how loud the stillness can be
Isn't that the truth! Hugs, SEAgal~
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passing shadows
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displaced
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2004-11-17
08:21 PM
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how touching
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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
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2004-11-17
08:34 PM
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SEA~ You know that I know this feeling ... it aches ... oh, yes~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))><
Email noles1@totcon.com
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JamesMichael
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2004-11-18
01:00 AM
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Nice writing...reminded me of the time I waited at Knotts Berry Farm with a dozen roses...she never showed...some days are harder than others...James
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Aimster
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2004-11-18
08:25 AM
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beautiful girlie, just beautiful! the honesty of this is amazing. I especially loved the following line--
"funny...how much sound silence can make how loud the stillness can be"
just beautiful susan, like your heart
hugs, Amy"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"
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LeeJ
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2004-11-18
08:27 AM
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Ohhh boy, this one sure brings back memories...
A very heart wrenching write...well done sent chills up my spine Hugs to you Lee J.
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Susan Caldwell
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Florida
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2004-11-18
09:14 AM
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"the unspoken screams at me forcing me to face truths I don’t want to know
but, I’ve known all along haven’t I?"
Those lines are perfect. We always know and ignore..and in the end we pay for not believing the colors we saw from the start...
but you are right, we don't have to wallow in it...
"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" ~Sarah McLachlan~
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
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2004-11-18
09:19 AM
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I know this feeling ..and the ache. Great write Sue! Hugs~Nancy~ Time has cast a spell on you, So you won't ever forget me ~
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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
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2004-11-18
09:35 AM
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You've known all along... yes...
Wonderful!
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Christopher
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2004-11-18
10:36 AM
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love the silence/sound bit. purrfect.
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Gentle Spirit
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2004-11-18
10:48 AM
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funny...how much sound silence can make how loud the stillness can be
sometimes the silence can be deafening Sea. oh how this aches, you write it so well dear gal.
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JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
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2004-11-18
12:33 PM
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This is a keeper! Beautifully written heartfelt emotion. Great read SEA.
JL
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dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
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2004-11-18
03:11 PM
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hating the wait...and the knowing, but not wanting to know..and the accepting... well written!
hugs, g"Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw)
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Mark Bohannan
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2004-11-19
12:29 PM
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I didn't realize it was you on the steps. Well now a double treat ... you back in blue pages and a poem worthy of much "silence". Well done and nice to see your name in here.
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ethome
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2004-11-19
04:50 AM
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Sea
I love the end....I know you ain't no wallower girl.....~g~
Very nicely done and cool picture. Reflections of maturity I'd say. My how the pain can make us grow!
Eric
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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
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2004-11-19
05:49 AM
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this one writes for many~~
and a Happy belatd birthday, Sea
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Cpat Hair
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2004-11-19
09:51 AM
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you still waiting ma'am?
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SEA
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2004-11-19
07:00 PM
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Jimmy~ thanks so much for that...
C9~ thank you
Bluesy~ yeah...sure is, thanks
Dixie~ thank you
Marge~ I knew you would (((hugs)))
James~ she has no idea what a great guy she missed out on!
Amy~ thanks sweetie, you da best!
Lee~ thank you very much
Susan~ sooo not gonna wallow...thanks for that
Nancy~ thank you!
Kari~ Unfortunately...yeah, I’ve known
Kissy Face~ thanks, and you will notice (I didn’t rhyme)
Donna~ yes, deafening is a good way to say it, thanks so much
JL~ thank you very much for that!
Dg~ haven’t seen you in here in a while, cool beans! And thank you
Mark~ you always make me smile, thanks mister..
Eric~ yes, pain will do that...thank you (((hugs)))
Maureen~ thank you, and thank you for the wishes!! I had a great day!
Ron~ no hon, I quit finally....
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garysgirl
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2004-11-20
06:52 PM
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funny...how much sound silence can make how loud the stillness can be
So true, Sea. A beautiful poem, though a little sad. Hugs,
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coyote
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2004-11-21
05:07 PM
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Sometimes we just have to get it off our chest. Well written and expressed, SEA.
Billy 8)
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Zinsser
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2004-11-24
03:31 PM
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very beautiful..... ~~Connie~~
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ESP
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2004-12-01
03:52 AM
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"my heart surrenders accepts the ache of you is forever but wallowing in it isn’t..."
...yeah...if I could've said it that beautifully I would have! I really like this piece, it strikes many chords.
*Hug*, Lizzie.
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~DreamChild~
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2004-12-01
04:12 AM
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This is a beautiful poem , indeed. i liked it very much.
and youre so pretty too.
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