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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 I waited for you... So sure that you’d be there my heart knew you wouldn’t forget not again.. funny...how much sound silence can make how loud the stillness can be the unspoken screams at me forcing me to face truths I don’t want to know but, I’ve known all along haven’t I? my heart surrenders accepts the ache of you is forever but wallowing in it isn’t... ~SEA~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sea.. it is good for you to ache just a bit looks lovely in your eyes enjoyed this ms |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thanks D you are so sweet...  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
some aches are bittersweet my friend... and sometimes filling them is too... do love the way you write it ma'am.... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you so much Ron... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Just dropped in for a few moments and am glad I did. This is beautiful SEA - one of those "I wish I had written" things. Applause to you my friend. Jimmy |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Great poem.... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
funny...how much sound silence can make how loud the stillness can be Isn't that the truth! Hugs, SEAgal~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how touching |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ You know that I know this feeling ... it aches ... oh, yes~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...reminded me of the time I waited at Knotts Berry Farm with a dozen roses...she never showed...some days are harder than others...James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beautiful girlie, just beautiful! the honesty of this is amazing. I especially loved the following line-- "funny...how much sound silence can make how loud the stillness can be" just beautiful susan, like your heart  hugs, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Ohhh boy, this one sure brings back memories... A very heart wrenching write...well done sent chills up my spine Hugs to you Lee J. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"the unspoken screams at me forcing me to face truths I don’t want to know but, I’ve known all along haven’t I?" Those lines are perfect. We always know and ignore..and in the end we pay for not believing the colors we saw from the start...  but you are right, we don't have to wallow in it..."cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I know this feeling ..and the ache. Great write Sue! Hugs~Nancy ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've known all along... yes... Wonderful! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
love the silence/sound bit. purrfect. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
funny...how much sound silence can make how loud the stillness can be sometimes the silence can be deafening Sea. oh how this aches, you write it so well dear gal. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
This is a keeper! Beautifully written heartfelt emotion. Great read SEA. JL |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hating the wait...and the knowing, but not wanting to know..and the accepting...  well written! hugs, g "Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I didn't realize it was you on the steps.  Well now a double treat ... you back in blue pages and a poem worthy of much "silence". Well done and nice to see your name in here. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sea I love the end....I know you ain't no wallower girl.....~g~ Very nicely done and cool picture. Reflections of maturity I'd say. My how the pain can make us grow! Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this one writes for many~~ and a Happy belatd birthday, Sea M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you still waiting ma'am? |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jimmy~ thanks so much for that... C9~ thank you Bluesy~ yeah...sure is, thanks Dixie~ thank you Marge~ I knew you would (((hugs))) James~ she has no idea what a great guy she missed out on! Amy~ thanks sweetie, you da best! Lee~ thank you very much Susan~ sooo not gonna wallow...thanks for that Nancy~ thank you! Kari~ Unfortunately...yeah, I’ve known Kissy Face~ thanks, and you will notice (I didn’t rhyme) Donna~ yes, deafening is a good way to say it, thanks so much JL~ thank you very much for that! Dg~ haven’t seen you in here in a while, cool beans! And thank you Mark~ you always make me smile, thanks mister.. Eric~ yes, pain will do that...thank you (((hugs))) Maureen~ thank you, and thank you for the wishes!! I had a great day! Ron~ no hon, I quit finally.... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
funny...how much sound silence can make how loud the stillness can be So true, Sea. A beautiful poem, though a little sad. Hugs,  |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Sometimes we just have to get it off our chest. Well written and expressed, SEA. Billy 8) |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
very beautiful..... ~~Connie~~ |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
"my heart surrenders accepts the ache of you is forever but wallowing in it isn’t..." ...yeah...if I could've said it that beautifully I would have! I really like this piece, it strikes many chords. *Hug*, Lizzie. |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
This is a beautiful poem , indeed. i liked it very much. and youre so pretty too. |
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