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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-11-17 03:26 PM



i wore my weary today
my grey woolen
the one that makes me itch
and wish i shed

“but you shouldn’t get chilled”
mama always said
and it is definitely cold out –

so-

i wrapped myself tighter
hoping for comfort

you stepped up behind me and said . . .

“may I help you with this?”

and you eased it from my shoulders
leaving me bare

then-

you enfolded me in your embrace of warm

and the sun came out
from behind the clouds

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-11-17 03:30 PM


Lovely Susan..absolutely lovely images.
Hugs, Nancy

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-11-17 03:33 PM


nice....warm....

brings smiles.  Loved this Susan.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2004-11-17 03:35 PM


yeah and they called the cops on us and said there was a naked lady and some old perv grabbin her in the middle of the freeway and....they were lady cops and had these big nasty finger nails and guns and..
oh..sorry kewl poem ..he seems like quite the guy, you ought to snag him if you can...

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-11-17 04:01 PM


Thank you so Nancy and Donna - you words and replies always warm my heart and I so appreciate your friendship -

D- yes - we caused such a ruckus,huh - nothing like ladie cops with long fingernails to scare us straight! hehe

I'll nab him if I can - how fast can he run?

Hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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