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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2004-11-17 01:25 PM

As the Buddha touched the earth to
bear witness to his day -

I too am awakened.

And in the early morning
sunlight...

I gently stroke your lips.

You are the world that turns
beneath my fingers.

May you bear witness to
this day.

[This message has been edited by Ericc (11-17-2004 02:56 PM).]

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-11-17 01:27 PM

simply lovely

Hiya....good to see you

May we all celebrate with you?

Hugs

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-11-17 01:45 PM

Very beautiful as always Eric!
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2004-11-17 07:55 PM

"You are the world that turns beneath my fingers"

Soul sentiments Eric.

Deeper still, the touch of that statement.
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-11-17 08:20 PM

you do have that special touch for writing this way

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2004-11-17 08:28 PM

Eric, you do this so easily and so masterfully.

Enjoy your style, very much.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

6 posted 2004-11-18 04:36 PM

It does get your knees knotted around the keyboard.

Like it Eric

Dave

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2004-11-18 05:25 PM

So very beautiful yet again Eric.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2004-11-18 05:53 PM

You are the world that turns
beneath my fingers.

wish I had written that...
very lovely

M

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

9 posted 2004-11-18 06:31 PM

Simple words make for a very beautiful poem. Great job.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2004-11-21 03:46 PM

You are the world that turns
beneath my fingers.

May you bear witness to
this day.

I bear witness to this day born from love ...

Masterful lines, dear Eric.

I love you.
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2004-11-21 11:37 PM

Enjoyed...James

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