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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-11-17 10:51 AM



Love flowing freely
heart whispers in gentle call
you remain          silent.

Eyes seeking answers
in need of understanding
one tear falls      silent.



{with thanks to all who silently inspired!}




The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-11-17 11:11 AM


Beautiful Donna...
Sometimes silence can speak volumes.
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2004-11-17 11:18 AM


I enjoyed these silent senryu, Sweet Spirit!

Love & Kindred hugs,
Linda

LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-11-17 11:23 AM


pretty as the author's heart
Enjoyed

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2004-11-17 02:09 PM



Ah sweetheart...this could not be more
Gentle in Spirit...

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5 posted 2004-11-17 03:04 PM


Sunshine said it perfectly!  Awesome!
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2004-11-17 03:10 PM


Gentle,
As lovely as a gentle breeze.

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
7 posted 2004-11-17 05:45 PM


Two very lovely Senyrus.  I espcially enjoyed the first one.  I think maybe for a reason.  
ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2004-11-17 06:22 PM


You write these as Monet has painted life.
Enjoyed.
TD

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9 posted 2004-11-17 08:23 PM


very pretty
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10 posted 2004-11-17 08:25 PM


Excellent Donna,  very good way of so
silently whispering it to us.

Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2004-11-18 08:18 AM


  hugs and thanks to ya'll!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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