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ctowen
Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2004-11-17 10:17 AM


One day

I'll wake up
to a dream

rub my eyes close
and see what
doesn't seem


One day

my words will find
one's fears

and fill their heart
with happiness
of tears


one day

we'll try to
follow step

beating the hours

each day
before
has keep ...


One day

"In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living."
  

© Copyright 2004 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-11-17 10:30 AM


One day could be as soon as tomorrow....
very nicely done!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2004-11-17 10:51 AM


too many one days....take away one, what remains is the moment called today
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-11-17 11:10 AM


yes my friend...one day

extremely visual,,thank you

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-11-17 11:12 AM


Well done Craig...thought provoking piece.
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

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