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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665


0 posted 2004-11-17 06:31 AM


There's a chill,
do you feel it?
It's in the world,
catching it's breath.

Me, i dont feel it,
a man of nothing.
Never will it affect me,
i did not bring it.

Beauty is in my heart,
not hate, nor shame.
My hands are for welcome,
not to point in blame.

So i stroll in grace,
who can say that?
Taking solitude in simplicity,
giving love in sunshine days.

Who has no concience?
Who is stronger in mind?
Hypochrisy is not how i live,
plain, without chains.

Can you admire natures beauty?
Or are you distracted by trappings?
I stand and watch,
as you go round on the carousel.

Are you dizzy yet?
Too late, you can never
get off now, you got on.
Dont worry i'll take photo's.

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2004-12-28 04:17 AM


Giving Love in sunshine days, yes this will be....You make me dizzy
and take photos, I love being your muse

I think you should title this one carousel...

Very good!

Love VQ ~xxxxxxxx


Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


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