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Tim
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0 posted 2004-11-16 11:38 PM



Once there was a piece of fuzz,
A wee small piece with not much to it,
Then it was gone and all because,
I puckered up and then I blew it.

Now where fuzz went I did not know,
Perhaps went here, perhaps went there,
All I know is I did blow,
And where fuzz went I did not care.

Late that night I went to bed,
I felt a crawly on my face,
I hit that bug, my nose it bled,
To the bathroom I did race.

Probiscus swollen, in the mirror,
Saw blood flowing, guessed I blew it,
For I saw when mirror got nearer,
A piece of fuzz with not much to it.

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1 posted 2004-11-17 07:20 AM





Been there
done that!


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2 posted 2004-11-17 08:45 PM


Tim~
Just too, too cute are you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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3 posted 2004-11-17 08:54 PM


This is good...made me laugh....I still am.

Good write Tim....Good to see ya again.

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4 posted 2004-11-17 09:16 PM


enjoyed the flow of this and the humor very very good
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