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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-11-16 11:26 PM


So This is Bliss


Enjoying her smile,
her touch and
her kiss
while
caressing
her tenderness.


JamesLee
November15
2004

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babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
1 posted 2004-11-17 07:16 AM


sweet, succint thought...

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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2 posted 2004-11-17 10:25 AM


Very sweet James.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-11-18 12:42 PM


Thank you babygirl and Susan...James
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4 posted 2004-11-18 12:46 PM


you have such a romantic heart James...always enjoy your lovey stuff...
Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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5 posted 2004-11-18 12:53 PM


Yes, I think it might be.  As usual, you convey the emotion with spare and vibrant words.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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6 posted 2004-11-18 01:07 PM


Ah, that sounds blissful -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

iwontdrownagain
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since 2003-10-04
Posts 39
Massachusetts
7 posted 2004-11-18 02:06 PM


I wish someone would write things like this to me... It's wonderful.

"The green of your eyes
That you get from your father
Shows your personality,
Such a young girl with an equally
Young and foolish heart."
~Lynn M

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