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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Far more than eye That gentleness of feeling imparts The trine of ethereal aurora fills the port cup And looking over at you, that light paints my vision ~wet~ Copyright Kkh 11/16/04 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
K. you write at a level that dwarfs normal daily speech. Taking each line and understanding the meaning, the feel...the desire leads one on a silk covered path of mystery and passion as well. Nicely done. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Just...wow! |
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Dautz Write Member
since 2004-11-16
Posts 96 |
Masterfully done, TD. Enjoyed. Dautz Write... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I would have to say that we would be hard pressed to find someone that could deny you have a vision above most. Whether you say it short or story it for us to enjoy, you leave quite an impression. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
So much has been packed into so few words, incredibly elegantly. I have enjoyed this much.  Smile |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"And looking over at you, that light paints my vision ~wet~"  outstanding TD!"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
agreeing with all the above...adding, would love to meet you some day Brilliant! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!!!! Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
This poem was well... just a little bit AWESOME! " Now what do you THINK about that? " |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice write... ThisDiamond. Wow indeed! JL |
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